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The following appeared in a recommendation from the planning department of the city of Transopolis.
"Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway. Subsequently, several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased. To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city. Since some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
翻译
以下文字出自Transopolis市规划部门的一封推荐信：
“十年前，作为一项综合城市改造项目的一部分，Transopolis市为了工业用途在高速路附近改造了一大片严重低于标准的住房。随后，那里建立了若干工厂，犯罪率降低了，全市资产税收入增加。为进一步使城市繁荣，我们应该在城市另一侧的正在衰落的居住区采取类似的行动。由于现有邻近社区的一些住宅和公寓无人居住，可为这一行动产生的搬迁户提供现成的备用房。”
写一篇文章，阐述需要哪些具体的证据来评价这个论证过程，并解释这些证据如何削弱或强化这个论证过程。
分析
前提：改造大片不达标住房何况以使城市返祖率降低，资产税收增加+some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available
[译]由于现有邻近社区的一些住宅和公寓无人居住，可为这一行动产生的搬迁户提供现成的备用房
结论：To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city
[译]为进一步使城市繁荣，Transopolis市应该在城市另一侧的正在衰落的居住区采取类似十年前的行动
论据：
1. Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway
[译]十年前，作为一项综合城市改造项目的一部分，Transopolis市为了工业用途在快速路附近改造了一大片严重低于标准的住房
2. Several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased
[译]那里建立了若干工厂，犯罪率降低了，全市资产税收入增加
提纲(可攻击点)
1、在高速路附近修建低标准住房对于在该地建立工厂有哪些影响?建立工厂都要考虑哪些因素?
2、在高速路附近修建低标准住房对于在该地犯罪率有哪些影响?犯罪率的高低是由哪些因素共同决定的?
3、在高速路附近修建低标准住房对于在该地资产税收增加有哪些影响?资产税收是由哪些因素共同决定的?
4、十年前的经验对于现在是否依然适用?可能会存在哪些问题?
5、在高速路附近修建低标准住房的经验，对于生在衰落的居住区能够适用?可能存在哪些问题?
6、无人居住的住宅和公寓能否直接被用来做备用房?产权等问题如何处理?